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COMMENTS: Consequences In Blue Notes Consequences In Blue Notes was originally posted on the Blair Firsters Board between January 5 and January 10, 2002 and is still can be read there in a folder of the same name. Consequences In Blue Notes was my first attempt at writing fan fiction and I was very nervous about posting the story. From the beginning posters on the BF board, however, were warm, encouraging and supportive. I appreciated their comments beyond measure at the time and the comments are just as precious to me now. I wanted to preserve the comments so I have archived them on this page. Please note that the comments reveal plot twists and story elements, so if you have not read Consequences and would rather not know what happens, it might be best to wait to view this page until after you’ve finished the story. On the other hand, the comments are arranged so that they are labeled by the chapters that the poster just finished reading. If you are in the course of reading Consequences and want to see what, if anything, other posters said about a particular chapter, you can look for the comments associated with that chapter number. If you would like to make a comment about Consequences In Blue Notes, leave your message at the Key West Screened Porch in Tessarae Inn Annex. I will periodically update this page with new comments as they become available. –Tessarae87 7.4.02 CHAPTER 1 & 2 Go
23 1/5/02: So
far it's great Tess. I especially liked when he joined her in bed. The Crack Whore in me is hoping that she doesn't decide to leave because that's the impression that I'm getting. It's good that he's not trying to force her to forgive him. Although I adore Starr, I'm glad that Blair is putting her foot down and telling her that she needs to be alone. I liked that she didn't trash Todd to her. Blainca 1/5/02: Three thumbs
up!!! This is real, blair
putting her foot down...does blair even know what her feet look ike these days? DD3189 1/10/02: Tess Tess Tess
Let me introduce myself I am dd also known as
Zen Master Stalk of Fan Fiction....I am here to tell ya I love it. I see I have much to catch up on so you are safe for now from my stalking for more chaps....But beware as soon as I catch up I will be nagging. The way to avoid it is write alot and stay ahead of me.....Good work keep it going. Tessarae87 1/10/02: Thanks
again, Go and blainca. And dd... I can’t tell you how honored I am to be a potential fan fiction stalking victim!! Luckily for me I posted the last chapter today! I feel almost legit. Thanks and I am really glad you are enjoying the story. CHAPTER 5 & 6 Zzanee 1/5/02: Very
Interesting beginning... Blair on her own.
The chapters about her pain had me close to tears. Because you know that pain is
there. You can feel radiating from her sore and red. No quick fix. Go23 1.5.02: I hope she
doesn't stay away for too long. This was good stuff. Blainca 1.5.02: It seems to me
Blair Is a little
lost...She seem sure of one thing that she is flying free...leaving her children
leads me to think she is not in her right mind...all her life one wave after
another...she needs to catch her breath sometime... Blainca 1.5.02: I just re-read
this I have one
question... Joyce317 1.6.02: Re:
Consequences in Blue Notes (Chap 5 &6) You have been
holding out of us. This is very good for your first attempt. LadydayN 1.6.02: blainca I
noticed that too..... like she just can't
deal with him right now. She's overwhelmed by emotions (very very sad ones) at
this point and just can't deal. Actually she IS dealing in her own way. This is
very interesting tess. I like it so far. And like zzanee, I almost had tears in
my eyes when Blair was crying in bed thinking about all her pain, etc. Tessarae87 1/6/02: THANK
YOU! Thank you for taking
the time to tell me what you think about the story!! CHAPTER 7 & 8 Zzanee 1.6.02: Like that Blair
has found a friend. It is nice to see
Sheri reaching out to her. Wes and Sheri sound interesting. Sheri and Blair
could form a broken-hearts clubs. LadydayN 1/6/02: ohhhh,
she's still not acknowledging her son! But I still am
loving this story. Very Blairian! Blainca 1.6.02: what
a story! She thinks she
making progress...but she really is putting on a show that is draining her... CHAPTER 11 & 12 LadydayN 1.8.02: Keep it coming
Tess! This is a very very good story. I am awaiting Blair's story. I wonder if she will ever remember her son? CHAPTER 15 & 16
LadydayN 1.8.02: Damn girl, you
are too good! Omg, I love this!
Blair singing with a rock star, being wanted by a rock star! And I love how she
finally was able to think about Jack without pain. Love that it was with Travis
that she first corrected herself "I have a daughter.... and a son". Blainca
1.8.02: Taking
in deep breaths WOW!!! Towards the
end I was reading at world record speed!!! Joyce317 1.8.02: Re: Taking in
deep breaths I've said it before
you have been holding out on us. This is so good. Loved the songs you used to
show the depth of her despair, the healing she got from her music, the love and
affection she gives and receives from the people of this little town. Quen 1.9.02: I'm just now
discovering this story! And boy am I happy I
did. Take a few days off from the internet world and you miss a lot. Tessarae87 1.10.02: Thanks,
Everyone! I am SO glad you are
enjoying the story. I posted the last chapters today—the big finish. I hope it
works. If not there's always next time :-) CHAPTER 17 & 18 LadydayN 1.10.02: Go Emily!!!
And tess, I want to
let you in on a little secret. I have been enjoying this story SO much, that um,
cough, uhhhhhmmm, well you see, <come closer>.....I didn't even notice
there was no smut until this last chapter! And even though it wasn't graphic
smut, it was just FINE for me. Go23 1.14.02: I loved when he
gave her back her rings and she took them. Sorry but I'm a TnB
CW and despite what he's done to her, I can't help but want them back together. To leave a message about Conseqences
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